The Broken Girls by Simone St. James is a tale that occurs in two timelines that are woven together so wonderfully. I was so impressed by all the smaller details that went into this storyline and how it all built up to that ending!
This is a book that I already cannot wait to read again!
Full disclosure: I was gifted an ARC of this book from a fellow blogging friend, Chris Wolak of WildMooBooks (thanks again, Chris!!). Any quotes I have pulled out in my review below may no longer be accurate, unfortunately I was not yet able to compare it to the final version.
My Thoughts on The Broken Girls by Simone St. James
In this novel, we follow two timelines;
- Vermont in 1950– In this timeline, we focus on a group of girls at a boarding school, called Idlewild Hall, who are struggling to keep their cool under the pressures of their personal histories and frustrations with their families, keeping up with school work, dealing with rough women that oversee the girls, and, most terrifyingly, the ghost named Mary Hand that haunts the school and who has been making more frequent appearances. But then one day, one of the girls goes missing.
- Vermont in 2014– In this timeline, we focus on a journalist named Fiona Sheridan who’s sister was found murdered and dumped on the field of Idlewild Hall. When Fiona hears that someone has purchased the property and wants to renovate it, she convinces the local paper to let her cover the story, much to her boyfriends dismay. And the boyfriend? He’s a cop. The two struggle with a bit of a Romeo and Juliet situation, but both become heavily invested in the story that they begin to uncover.
I usually don’t like dual timelines simply because I tend to prefer one timeline over the other, and sometimes the organization confuses me. However, these two timelines were both written and organized very well! I loved each of the timelines, and I really enjoyed how each of them held their own levels of suspense. I loved how many different side stories were also woven into the overall storyline. I was super impressed when each of the smaller elements began coming together toward the end.
The characters were so interesting! I loved learning more about each of the girls from 1950 whether that was through their timeline or through what Fiona was uncovering in her timeline. I was just so antsy to learn what each of the girls histories were and how they ended up at Idlewild Hall. I also really enjoyed Fiona, the main character from the 2014 timeline, and how brave and determined she was to find answers.
When it comes to the suspense, I definitely felt that there was an overall chilling factor, but the suspense didn’t really ramp up until the middle of the book. However, toward the end, that’s when things got really intense!
But the mystery? Wonderfully done! From the very first page to the very last page, this tale had me totally captivated.
My Favorite Passages on The Broken Girls
This was a detail that was rubbing her raw, keeping her wound bleeding, long after everyone else had tied their bandages and hobbled away. She should grab a crutch – alcohol or drugs were the confident ones – and start hobbling with the rest of them.
There was something soothing and meditative about the side of a road, a place most people passed by. As a child she’d spent car rides looking out the window, thinking of the places they passed, wondering what it would be like to stop there, or there, or there. It had never been enough for her just to get from one place to another.
That twenty-year-old fear was buried deep in the tenor of his voice, but Fiona could hear it. It was like a whistle on a dog’s frequency, that fear. Only someone who felt the same would know.
Fiona arrived at Margaret Eden’s home at Mitchell Place, a gated community of expensive townhouse built during the book years before the 2008 crash. Even then, the neighborhood’s existence had hinged more on hope than on actual local wealth; there wasn’t much demand for “executive” homes for wealthy professionals in Barrons, and the houses had taken years longer to complete than planned.
Fiona thought about this, still staring at her ceiling. The story itself was a horror so large it threatened to overtake everything in its path. She had to try to control it, not to let the nightmare send her off the path of what she was really after.
Roberta Greene tilted her head up slowly, then looked up at the ceiling, and Fiona watched grief fall over her like a blanket. The old woman blinked, still looking up, and two tears tracked down her parchment cheeks. Her sadness was so fresh, so raw, it was as if none of the years has happened at all.
And for the first time in twenty years, Fiona let the words into her head, like a cold draft from a cracked window: Could they have gotten it wrong?
CeCe’s anger was like an overfilled balloon she couldn’t tuck away and didn’t want to touch it for fear it would explode.
My Final Thoughts on The Broken Girls
I thought that this book was very well written and the flow of the storyline made it so difficult to put down! From all of the smaller details that were woven in and the organization of the overall storyline, to the development of the characters and how they all interacted with one another, this was such a great story. I was totally sucked in while reading and it had me guessing right up until the very end. I already cannot wait to reread this one!
I cannot wait to check out more from Simone St. James!
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Have you read this book or any other works from this author? If so, I’d love to hear your thoughts!
Cora Tea Party Princess says
Oh my gosh, this sounds excellent!
I love it when a book sucks you in and you can't put it down.
Broken Girls is definitely going straight on my TBR.
Cora | http://www.teapartyprincess.co.uk/
Erica Metcalf says
I hope you enjoy it as much as I did when you get to it!!
Stephen James says
This sounds interesting. Will definitely add it to my list!
Erica Metcalf says
Enjoy!!
Amy says
Wow this looks incredible. I have an eBook waiting to be read, and now I'm even more eager to start it! I'm glad the dual timelines worked so well – I was nervous about that aspect.
Erica Metcalf says
I hope you enjoy it! I’d love to read your review!
Barb says
Yay! Sounds like I'm going to love this one as well!
Erica Metcalf says
I cannot wait to see what you think!
Paige says
Is this scar or just mysterious? I have a low threshold for handling scary and cannot decide whether to try it or not! Also I agree with you completely about preferring one timeline to another!
Erica Metcalf says
I would say it’s more mysterious and just a litttle spooky, but I love horror so I may not be the best one to ask lol!
Angela Lawrence says
Sounds like a great book from start to finish!
Erica Metcalf says
It sure was!! I loved it!
Suzanne at The Bookish Libra says
This sounds wonderful. I love a good dual timeline story!
Erica Metcalf says
It was so perfect!!
Heather G. says
Sounds like a fantastic read!
Erica Metcalf says
I definitely recommend it!
Chris Wolak says
So glad you liked it!!!
Erica Metcalf says
<3
Verushka Byrow says
Dual timelines can be tricky — glad this worked out for you!
Erica Metcalf says
They sure can!! I’m glad I gave this one a chance!
Lindsi says
I've seen this one around, but I believe this is the first review I've read for it! I actually love books with dual timelines! I enjoy seeing different perspectives over time, especially books that bounce between before and after. I like knowing the ending and finding out how they got there!
Lindsi @ Do You Dog-ear?
Erica Metcalf says
Ooh! I think you would love this one then! It's put together so wonderfully!!
Lark says
I'm not a huge fan of dual timelines either, but I thought it worked really well in this book. Simone St. James is one of my favorite authors. I've loved all of her books. Great post! 🙂
Erica Metcalf says
I can't wait to read more by her!! This was my first 🙂
Carole Wooten says
I have heard so many great things about this one. I sometimes find that I enjoy one timeline much more than the other in books like this but I have encountered quite a few stories that really did a good job with both timelines which seems to be the case here. I do hope to get to this one someday!
Erica Metcalf says
Definitely! This one is done so well!
Farrah says
Dual timeline stories can be had to execute well (I usually end up liking one timeline's story more than the other too) but this sounds really interesting! I'm gonna have to add this to my to read list! :]
Erica Metcalf says
Same here! It’s always so exciting to find a dual timeline where you enjoy both!
Shooting Stars Mag says
I really want to read this one!!!
-Lauren
http://www.shootingstarsmag.net
Erica Metcalf says
😀
Veronica @ The Burgeoning Bookshelf says
Great review. I really want this one now.
Erica Metcalf says
😀
Megan says
I love books that have more than one timeline. It's always fun to see how things line up 🙂 This is a great review and I'm linking up to you for our new meme, The Friday Five.
🙂 Megan @ Ginger Mom & Company
Erica Metcalf says
<3
DJ Sakata says
After seeing your excellent review I have to make time to read this one, it has been languishing on my TBR for months
Erica Metcalf says
Wahoo!! I hope you enjoy it as much as I did!